Some people say that only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only resona why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, travelling has become part of every human being for a purpose such as work or pleasure. If this will happen then the demand for learning a foreign language will rises. However, some people assert that one should learn a foreign language if needed while others state learning a new language would be beneficial to boost knowledge. I will discuss, both the view of an argument in the upcoming paragraphs.
Many people travel for work in other countries and learn their native language to become more and more popular. Firstly, in a need of money workers pursue their happiness far away from home. Also, the employees are looking towards a people who are not only skilled but also know various languages more than their mother tongue. Sooner or later, those who omitted learning more are prone to become jobless.
Secondly, in my mind, a new language would not be learned just cor travelling or working in a foreign country. The learning of new language would help the learner to broaden his pr her mind. Additionally, this will help to know world and our ancestors thinking in a better way. Hence, learning beside for work always resulted fruitful to the people to understand race in a descriptive way.
To conclude, I believe that learning a different language would be not only for satisfying our physical needs, such as money but also for our moral needs because never before had such a big thirst.
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- Many different countries have most shops and products as the same Some people consider it positive development whereas other consider it negative development Discuss both the views and give your opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'rise'
Suggestion: rise
...nd for learning a foreign language will rises. However, some people assert that one s...
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Line 5, column 369, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a descriptive way" with adverb for "descriptive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...uitful to the people to understand race in a descriptive way. To conclude, I believe that learnin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87190082645 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4668313997 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586776859504 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1325632938 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6923076923 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354511416209 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122961918457 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874448370546 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207247486994 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822501018089 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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