Some people say that people remember special gifts or present that they receive. Why do you think that is? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Gifts are gesture of love. Hence, these are always remembered by the people as special presents, is asserted by a part of population. However, it is true to only some extent as masses do not remember all of them, typically a few them - due to reasons like affection, love, meaning and gratitude.
To commence with, it is not wrong to assume that people receive umpteen of presents on quotidian basis from their relatives, friends, loved ones or any other person whenever there is an occasion being celebrated. Although, saying that they remember all these gifts is kind of misleading as even people tend to forget some mementos in the time period of one or two months, sometimes, may be even in less time. To cite an example, a person receives many gifts on his/her marriage or birthday but tend to disregard them as minor things, once the event has ended.
Nevertheless, there are always some presents which are recalled by a person every time he/she sees it and always kept close to the heart. Such gifts always come from the person toward whom the receiver is very affectionate and loving. To exemplify, girls always like adornments given to them by the person they love even this is not something they wanted. In addition, special or hidden meaning behind the gift also plays an inseparable role in such things. For instance, a child giving roses to his mother on 'Happy Mother's Day' or any other occasion showing the cordiality and attachment, will unfailingly be recalled by the latter person, even in the normal talk about the son or daughter. Beside this, gifts in the form of donation, charity, perks, gratitude also tend to hold special place in person’s life especially if, given in times of need. Same is the case with the gifts that people cannot afford and receive from other person. For example, my brothers bought me a mobile phone when I turned 17 years old which made me very happy and even though, the phone has starting giving out some problems, I still use it a lot.
Having discussed the aforementioned views, it is not wrong for an individual to expect from people to remember mementos given by him/her, even though, it is not always the case as most people give presents to show their feelings, not on the basis that they will always be remembered.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...others Day or any other occasion showing the cordiality and attachment, will unfa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76826196474 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5041530112 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544080604534 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.1240049427 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.2 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4666666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206587886358 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073719014365 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046266409198 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144077502625 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262679867577 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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