Some people say that physical education classes are an important part of a child's education. Others believe that it is more important to focus on academics during school time. Discuss both these views, and give your opinion.
A controversial subject was raised about whether physical education is a critical subject of the educational system or students just should concentrate on academics while they study at school. From my perspective, I believe that a holistic schooling environment comprising of both physical and academic education should be provided to children for the greatest improvement. These two types of education have their own merits.
On the one hand, it is obviously true that physical education has beneficial impacts on students. The first reason for this is learning that kind of education is advantageous for students’ health. This could be explained by the fact that when doing physical activities in high intensity, children's bodies are stimulated and a hormone called HGH will be created to make them grow, improve cardiorespiratory fitness, build strong bones and muscles. Another reason is that physical education reduces adolescents' risk of many chronic mental illnesses. These days, students have to study a lot, absorbing a large amount of knowledge possibly causes them to get stressed. For example, some scientists claim that some kids in the schooling environment without physical education tend to get mental illnesses such as depression, anxiety disorders more than that in the other one.
Nevertheless, I believe that learning academics has its own pros. First, knowledge is power. Preparing knowledge from an early age is beneficial for children’s future. With a wide range of knowledge, children will be able to pursue their dream, it is a stepping-stone for their future. Furthermore, having academic graduation is an advantage in modern life. A degree is a method of showing knowledge and academic level. For instance, college graduates see more job opportunities than non-graduates, recruiters are inclined to those who have graduated. Consequently, academic education plays an important role in children’s pursuits.
To conclude, these two types of education have their own advantages, I contend that a schooling environment comprising of both physical and academic education is the best for students’ growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'comprising' or 'consisting of'?
Suggestion: comprising; consisting of
...e that a holistic schooling environment comprising of both physical and academic education sh...
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Message: Did you mean 'comprising' or 'consisting of'?
Suggestion: comprising; consisting of
... I contend that a schooling environment comprising of both physical and academic education is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, while, for example, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56441717791 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15206699886 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570552147239 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2589064161 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.777777778 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265006575452 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855915057787 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690597631243 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179149243083 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386059074379 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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