Some people say that self-employment is better than a job in a company or an institution. Discuss your opinion and give reasons to support your answer.
The family is an important part of society. Each family member has a great influence on one another and family is a place where the exchange of values takes place. Elders in the family hold a great role in moulding the children. This essay agrees to the statement and enumerates its benefits.
Obviously, letting children play and interact with elders make both of them happy.for most of the elders' life after retirement would be bored and the children are the ultimate panacea for this loneliness. meanwhile, for children grandparents are like an encyclopaedia which consist of vast knowledge and experience. children can witness life and its true colours through elders which enable them to be pragmatic.
In contrast, It has its drawback as well. Old age people will not be healthy and fast as children, this, in fact, leads to disharmony. Most of the time handling children requires great effort and a lot of physical movements which could be a herculean task for the elders. At the same time, Parents play a pivotal role in icing this snow where they can guide the children to be obliged to the elders.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 99, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'elders'' or 'elder's'?
Suggestion: elders'; elder's
...make both of them happy.for most of the elders life after retirement would be bored an...
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Line 2, column 205, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Meanwhile
...e ultimate panacea for this loneliness. meanwhile, for children grandparents are like an ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 316, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Children
...nsist of vast knowledge and experience. children can witness life and its true colours t...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while, in contrast, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 190.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85263157895 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58936670725 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5019752546 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8181818182 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0196817769183 0.244688304435 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0107798021118 0.084324248473 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0182596089158 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0139306833103 0.151304729494 9% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00158721239603 0.056905535591 3% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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