Some people say we do not need to use printed paper newspapers anymore? To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the light of the proliferation of online news outlets, traditional press has been marginalized and is considered no longer necessary. While online news is superior to printed news in many aspects, I believe that the latter will never be completely replaced.
It is understandable why people are eschewing printed newspapers in favor of their online counterparts. The key driving factor behind this trend is that reading news on the Internet is much speedier. Instead of going to a newsstand to buy newspapers, people today can access news almost instantaneously on their mobile devices using Internet connection. Another reason is that online news is virtually free. Most news websites do not charge readers, which discourages many from buying traditional newspapers.
Despite the aforementioned benefits of online news, I believe that there are several compelling reasons why printed news cannot be eliminated. First, it is clear that a large number of people have a strong preference for this form of media. For example, elderly people who are not accustomed to reading on a digital screen due to their poor eyesight usually favor traditional papers. Furthermore, the disappearance of printed news may cause far-reaching repercussions for many industries. For example, the waning demand for printed newspapers may for publishing houses and logging companies to lay off staff, triggering mass unemployment.
In conclusion, while the advantages of online news are irrefutable, I believe that printed publications still have a role in society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... be eliminated. First, it is clear that a large number of people have a strong preference for thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51882845188 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14987460927 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594142259414 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5272860865 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.461538462 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0967452666217 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037675966908 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323012647604 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0559440702034 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324260107193 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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