In the future, it seems it will be more difficult to live on the earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planets to live, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The threats of pollution over the last few decades have told us that our survival may be tenuous. In the future, it seems that the earth will be no longer the place where people can live. For this reason, some people believe that more money should be invested in finding other planets to live namely Mars. From my perspective, I completely agree with this point of view because of the following reasons.
First and foremost, I would argue that the problems which arise from climate change happening over the world could push the earth towards the brink of extinction. Much as I agree that there are several solutions to mitigate the detrimental effects of environmental pollution, it seems to me that it is nearly impossible to stop environmental degradation due to the permanent human demands. For instance, although we know that the huge amount of exhaust fumes stems from factories is one of the primary causes of climate change, it is an arduous challenge for we to shut down all factories because they serve our life. In other words, the end of the world might be inevitable; therefore, I believe that governments should allocate money to projects aiming to find other planets that human can live.
Additionally, the investment in cosmic research could bring considerable benefits to the society at large scale. The question about the likelihood of life on the other planets has haunted scientists for centuries; for example, the large number of artificial satellites has been launched into the universe to satisfy this curiosity. Thus, if scientists have more aid of advanced technology, they might find accurate answers for this question. Another benefit is space tourism which is the unique industry relating to researching other planets. Space tourism not only pushes out the horizon of our universal knowledge but also makes outstanding contributions to the national economy.
In conclusion, with all aforementioned reasons, I strongly believe that researching other planets to live should be high on the agenda.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15757575758 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76731546709 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593939393939 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6274886567 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.571428571 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311045094718 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106801144045 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118229897704 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210178706116 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128857990086 0.056905535591 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.