Some people support development of agriculture like, factory farming and scientific creation of fruits and vegetables. While other oppose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays technology is flourishing. Every single day new gadgets, phones or laptops are introduced in the market.Some people are very keen to buy them.In this essay, I opine the reason whether it is good or bad.
To begin with, due to technological advancement and modern influence people are attracted to new products such as cellphones, Ipads etc. There is a feeling of adrenaline rush to buy all that is launched.
According to me, fondness to these items are good, but when this changes to want becomes a problem. Wasting money on these materialistic pleasures is egregious.
Secondly, as the living standards are modifying. Everyone are on a run to stand out in the crowd.For this they are willing to spend a huge sum of cash.People believe their reputation is directly proportional to the materials, due to which the importance of everything is declining and effects the psychological behaviour.
Thirdly, humans have the tendency to get persuaded by other's opinions, which resulted in raised individual's spending spere.The only person beneficial here is the industry or market. In this scenario, the market plays a salient role.People are influenced by the advertisements and new features produced in them, thereby increasing their desire.
To end, materialistic happiness is always a temporary one and to find permanent cheerfulness individuals should value these products.
- Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 11
- Some parents think children should have mobile phones others disagree Discuss both the sides and give opinion 81
- Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60, it could cause problem. Do you agree or disagree. 67
- Some people support development of agriculture like, factory farming and scientific creation of fruits and vegetables. While other oppose. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 11
- Some people are fond of buying new gadgets, phones or laptops. Is it good or bad thing? Discuss your opinion. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57798165138 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15876569093 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.669724770642 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.1686047803 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.545454545 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0395566939299 0.244688304435 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0114942313196 0.084324248473 14% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0127369920672 0.0667982634062 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0171625906324 0.151304729494 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0131772148185 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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