Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60, it could cause problem. Do you agree or disagree.
Older people though have immense knowledge and experience but still few people think making them to work after age of 60 can cause the threat to the society as well as company.I partially agree to the notion.In this essay, I would state the reasons for this.
Firstly, as the technology increasing the global market is digitalizing.But older people still stick to the ancient method of manual work. Also, its difficult to change their mentality at this stage of life. They prefer the techniques followed from long time than the new methods.This not only affect the organisation but can also lower the growth in the global market.Moreover, organisation need new ideas and for this they required to hire young minds which is only possible after retirement of older individuals.Furthermore, this would give job opportunities for many young and fresh minds.
Secondly, with the age the cognitive thinking and processing ability of mind decreases.Even many health related issues arises such as detioriating memory power and speed in work gradually falls.However, there are some organisation who appoint old people for advisory departments because they have decades of market experience and knowledge. Moreover, they act as a guardian angel for the company. On the other hand, some continue to work after the certain age to stay healthy mentally. As after retirement many feel isolated, depressed and detached from the social life. However, they should engage themselves to less stressful works like gardening for killing their time.
To recapitulate, I think people after certain age should retire and vacant the seats for the young generation. Government should impose laws which are beneficial for the betterment of older people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, i think, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44688644689 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03635386276 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608058608059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 111.047454676 49.4020404114 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.181818182 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1818181818 7.06120827912 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200257166665 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785253925823 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789578386644 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137132194438 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070374227216 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.