Some people think that the best way to get the news is through newspapers while others think it is through online media.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
it is true that the best option to update news whether through reading newspapers or using social media is a subject to debate. While reasons can be given to justify the former, the latter is much more preferable.
On the one hand, reading traditional newspaper to update news that is beneficial in some ways. Firstly, the information presented in the newspaper are always reliable and reputable because press agencies are responsible for the accuracy of the source of this information. Secondly, the newspaper contents are carefully prepared and appropriate due to the fact that it will be censored many steps before publication. Finally, newspapers are generally more accessible to the elderly and those in rural areas as their simplicity and relevance to those people daily routines. For example, elderly have struggles to use the modern electronic devices and they would chose newspaper as it the part of their way of life.
On the other hand, other would argue that accessing news through electronic media is the most valuable choice. The first prominent justification is that the information will be updated more quickly on social media since the internet can be accessed anywhere and anytime. Furthermore, there are wide range of contents that reader can reach though online media owning the fact that there are many writing articles and the space of the internet is unlimited. In addition, mobile phones are common in daily life which means that people can easily access to online media to reach news. For instance, almost everyone owns a smartphone in present time, plus the internet is always covered globally so it is like news just in their pocket.
In conclusion, for the reasons mentions above, although reading traditional newspaper is the best way for elderly people to update news, it seems evident that people in modern time believe accessing news through online media is the best option.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is true that the best option to update ...
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Line 3, column 661, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'choose'
Suggestion: choose
...odern electronic devices and they would chose newspaper as it the part of their way o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14102564103 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60098474246 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519230769231 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0204089946 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.384615385 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9230769231 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253363445618 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902198216572 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721158459267 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170262616088 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533575944685 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.