Some people think that boys and girls should be educated in the same schools. Others,
however, believe that girls achieve better results when educated in single-sex schools.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Grades are not the only thing measures the intelligence of the students. There are some people who feel that females get better results when educated in single-sex schools, however others think that co-education is better. I am going to scrutinise on both the aspects in further paragraphs before forming any opinion in the last.
firstly, some people think that if the girls study in the single-sex schools they will concentrate more on studies without any feelings for the opposite sex. for example, many single-sex institutions in India getting better results compared to co-educational institutions. The main drawback of the same gender schools is girls can't express their ideas freely to boys as they didn't communicated much in their school life.
On the other hand , in the co-educational schools we can learn how to interact with opposite sex along with the academics which is crucial in latter part of the life (while doing jobs) . Furthermore, in co-educational schools because of the interaction, girls will know how the opposite gender students will think and approach to a solution for the same kind of problem they are facing.for example, in many countries well reputed institutions are providing education for both genders.
To conclude, in my opinion co-education institutions will achieve better solutions to the long term problems which most of the single-sex school girls fails.
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- Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity .Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, for example, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32432432432 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90912533317 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599099099099 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9588336144 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.333333333 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5555555556 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322506883201 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136063835389 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105428819105 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213898155032 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595245878781 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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