Some people think children have the right to make mistakes, while other people believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some individuals argue that children should be able to make mistakes. Others, however, advocate that it is essential for parents to prevent children from flaws. Although both views possess a degree of accuracy, I agree with the notion that children must learn to distinguish between mistakes due to inexperience and illicit demeanors because it will be advantageous to the mental development of youngsters.
On the one hand, it is opined that children should be free to fail in order to gain more understanding. In fact, the involvement in unpleasant situations resulted from mistakes can teach children some concrete life lessons and help them to acknowledge that there are consequences to their actions and misdemeanors. As a result, they would exert efforts and establish a set of suitable behaviors to avoid repeating the mistakes in the future. Consequently, making mistakes is beneficial to the maturity and learning process of children.
On the other hand, some parents suggest that children should be guided to circumvent unwanted experiences for the sake of their well-being. Specifically, there are illegal and serious mistakes such as crimes that once children committed, nothing can be done to compensate for their actions. Therefore, children might be imposed punishment and sentenced to prison to pay for their delinquencies, which can ruin their future. Consequently, many people want to protect their children from committing irretrievable acts and losing their chance to lead a happy life.
To conclude, despite controversial schools of thought on determining the ultimate method to deal with juvenile faults, I endorse the idea that children should be taught to draw the line between acceptable and unacceptable mistakes. Accompanied by this mindset, children can thrive and contribute positively to society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, well, in fact, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49645390071 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06328797416 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595744680851 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4940146542 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.230769231 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293319775978 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111023376623 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557033226905 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176087038821 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655277276031 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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