Some people think that children perform better in a single-sex school compared to a mixed school. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
In some cultures over the world, the question of whether we should develop coeducation or single-sex education still sparks the severe controversy. While people believe that single-sex school creates an environment where pupils perform better than mixed - school can do, others embrace the idea that mixed-school is the best choice for children.
On the one hand, single-sex school is beneficial for the development of children because of two main reasons. Firstly, it is undeniable that boys and girls have different natures so that being educated following a separate suitable curriculum is beneficial for them. For example, some subjects are of much technical knowledge, such as Physics, attract more boys than girls while books with an emotional story that may resonate more with girls than with boys. Secondly, single-gender education creates a more relaxed environment reducing distraction and allowing effective class time. To be more specific, boys and girls in the single-sex class have more time for studying during tutorials rather than impressing the other gender and stay clear of unnecessary misconduct
On the other hand, single-gender schools cannot be a mirror of genuine society but mixed - schools can do. First of all, attending single-sex schools, children lose the opportunity to learn how to behave around the opposite sex as well as form awareness of gender equality at an early age which is extremely essential when they mature. In addition, coeducation help children are more confident in expressing personal views in the presence of the opposite sex, developing a positive self - image and working better in groups.
In conclusion, while some people prefer to taking their children to a single-sex school, I still believe that coeducation shall prevail as it may lead to a more balanced society in the future where women can be treated as equal to men
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: whether; the question whether
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, as for, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3255033557 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80585584283 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593959731544 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.3637517422 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.7 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.3 7.06120827912 245% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294600304621 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124832108252 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112449659818 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216040166587 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105806494072 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.