Although it is sometimes thought that environment related issues ought to be tackled internationally, some people think that focus should be on national level. In my opinion, I consider that environmental problems should be handled effectively on global scale to avoid its serious consequences.
On the one hand, it is often argued that environmental issues, which are the serious problems of our planet, should be solved on global level to get plausible solutions to alleviate its profound impact worldwide and I agree. In other words, environmental challenges like global warming, soil degradation, air pollution, water pollution, acid rain, ozone layer depletion, deforestation etc. have enormous negative effects so countries should discuss these issues internationally and give awareness about the major causes, potential negative effects and possible solutions. Furthermore, scientifically and technologically advance countries can provide aid to underdeveloped or developing countries. For instance, some developed countries have quick and sound methods to overcome these issues so it is helpful for other countries which are not technically advance.
On the other hand, other people believe that concern related to environment should be deal at national level for better understanding and to provide quick solution of the issue. For example air pollution and water pollution are the major issues related to climate change in developing countries specially Asian countries and these nations are working towards them effectively by implementation of national schemes. Another reason why national dealing with environmental issues is important is that countries will be motivated and self assured to tackle these obstacles. This is essential for a country to become technically sound in case of any urgent environmental related issues.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion, I think that environmental problems can be overcome in an effective manner if it should be dealing at global scale to prevent the planet from any further significant negative effect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dealt'?
Suggestion: dealt
...oncern related to environment should be deal at national level for better understand...
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Line 7, column 108, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an effective manner" with adverb for "effective"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... environmental problems can be overcome in an effective manner if it should be dealing at global scale...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73870967742 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15977745235 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554838709677 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.0217822636 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.25 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309849156587 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112713269798 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860257616484 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20959838335 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620546753887 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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