Some people think that everyone should aim to get white-collar jobs, while others believe there are advantages to blue-collar jobs as well. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
There are more and more people place emphasis on seeking a white-collar job, whereas, others embrace the opinion that blue-collar jobs also have some benefits and are worth respect. This essay is to elaborate on both points of view before coming to my opinion.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that an intellectual job is better for one’s career path because of some reasons. First of all, in the face of innovation economy which is more and more knowledge-based, white-collar workers are less likely to be unemployed while manual workers are facing the high rate of unemployment because most repetitive manual jobs will soon all be done by machines. Thus, many young people are trying to pursue higher education that can lead to a professional job. Secondly, apart from being paid more highly than manual workforces, office workers also enjoy many more perks, such as high bonuses, paid leaves, healthier working environments, and so on. Furthermore, white-collar workers generally have better professional connections and knowledge that help them get higher positions in the future and be useful in many other aspects of life as well.
However, blue-collar jobs still play important roles in economies due to some reasons. To begin with, in terms of individual perspective, because not everyone has cognitive ability and enough money to study universities and then find an intellectual job. Some people are more suited to become manual labor. Moreover, blue-collar jobs may be taxing on the body, but it is less stressful mentally. In fact, the suicide rate due to mental stress in work is increasing dramatically. For a nation, to maintain a healthy economy, it will need a diverse workforce. Manual labor will always be needed in jobs that do not require knowledge such as construction workers.
In conclusion, although a white-collar job is actually helpful for the youth today to get a better employment prospect, I still believe that at different options of each people, a blue-collar job is also good for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...knowledge such as construction workers. In conclusion, although a white-collar j...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, well, whereas, while, apart from, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12688821752 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90249790998 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592145015106 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1037945681 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.133333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337355525526 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110365794304 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911684404829 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23421617448 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733636822601 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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