There is a controversial topic about age of formal education in children. Some people believe the best age for starting school is 7 while others think that children should initiate education sooner.
To begin with, brains of children are different from each other and perhaps most of them cannot analyze sophisticated issues when they are toddler. For instant, many parents are trying to convince their children about some wrong acts but unfortunately they cannot. Because, the procedure of child's mind is not complete yet. That is why, I think it would be the best choice for child to commence school at age of 7 due to power of examination. In fact, scientists believe that in this common age, all novel information of education in different branches could be better analyzed.
On the other hand, some other think that children should start formal education under age of 7 owing to some reasons. For illustration, they say that if parent do not work on child's brain, her/his mind would be stayed lazy all the time or children need to be pushed in a way of education in lower age to be familiar with new subjects. Therefore, the process of lessons and assignments at school will be easier for them.
In addition, some intelligent children can solve intricate matters without having any experience of learner or teacher. Some people acclaim that for all types of children this event would happen if background of simple education can be carried out in their brain and I definitely disagree with this idea indeed.
In conclusion, as I discuss both sides of the subject, I believe that children in age of 7 have better opportunities to exhibit their skills of education rather than in lower ages. Because they can recognize various fields and new place of school to learn novel subjects that they never have heard about.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9064516129 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61414745366 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554838709677 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4004837285 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.642857143 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310763191029 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122182670104 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14411323638 0.0667982634062 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203534410829 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144122200011 0.056905535591 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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