Some people think that government should invest amount on art ad cultural values while others think that they should spend on others things.
The ultimate target of modern is to ensure the progress, safety and advancement of nation. Presently, some masees argue that authorities should spend amount on art and cultural values which are quite essential for us. However, other reckon that admenerstation should spend wealth on necessary things.
There are manifold point to endorse my point and view. First and formost, tradion and cultural values is a vital part of life. Therefore, government should spend amount on art and cultural values for preserving culture values. To elaborate, in modern times, most of people are forgetting regarding art and culture values. Thus, they can be aware about values. Moreover, spending amount on traditional buildings which have destroyed. Thus . They will built new things related to history. Due to this, another country people will vist for watching history things. In addition to this, it helps to preserve a tradition and culture art. More and more artists will makes new art related to history. On the contrary, opposite wind is also there.
To commence with, investing on other things is essential for us. To begin with, government should invest wealt on crime, unemployment and education because more and more folks have to face difficulty regarding unemployment then they can get well paid job for earning bread and butter. Last but not least, admenerstation should spend on trade and tourism amenities. Thus, they can boost economic growth of our country whch is vital for us.
From my notion, both side have their own significance. Henc3 government should spend art on culture values for preserving which they should invest on other thing according to government.
To recaptulate, undeniably art and culture value is quite essential for us. Hence, government should look budget before spending money on things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, well, in addition, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34482758621 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63571418959 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541379310345 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9433436186 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4545454545 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1818181818 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.40909090909 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401577399417 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108577291308 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11349837389 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25598085679 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604932118308 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.8 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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