Some people think that the government should not support creative artists and give money to the public sector. Other people claim that artists should be supported by the government. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Problem of the government's financial acts in different sectors has been discussed in society for recent years. There is an opinion that the government should not fund creators of art but should invest in more significant sectors of people's lives. At the same time there are some people who have an opposite opinion and think that artists should be funded too. Although the development of public sector should be in the government's preference, I think that supporting art sphere is not less important.
On the one hand, art exhibitions are a valuable part of the entertainment sphere. This means that people usually visit art events for relaxation, to broaden their minds or to find some inspiration for new beginnings, what is more, they pay money for this opportunity. Therefore, the government should be interested in supporting people who are creating art. According to research conducted by the New Institute for Cultural Studies in Russia in 2018 about 38 percent of respondents said that they are ready to attend art exhibitions in their free time. In other words, the development of art can be useful both morally and financially.
On the other hand, there is a point in paying attention to other spheres except art, in healthcare for example. That is because medicine and security are directly connected with life expectancy and life standards. Hence, developing healthcare in our country can be a better decision than funding artists. According to research conducted by Bloomberg in 2016 Russian level of healthcare was in 55th place among all countries. Thus, if there is a choice between entertainment and healthcare, the government should firstly invest in more vital sector.
In conclusion, even though there are important aspects which demand investments from the government, I think that sphere of art and culture is necessary for people's psychological and mental growth, consequently, it should be funded and developed as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 420, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...pment of public sector should be in the governments preference, I think that supporting art...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, in other words, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22611464968 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90324487155 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576433121019 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6659047557 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.4 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4666666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309977182205 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111834593003 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108724888174 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190572565251 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136179272544 0.056905535591 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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