Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Climate change has sparked controversies over its globally severe impact on various issues, particularly human beings’ live. While it is argued that people should learn to gradually adapt themself to this phenomenon, I totally disagree with this opinion.
The idea of coexistence with climate crisis is a temporary solution which solely tackles its consequences in a short-term period. The good example to illustrate this statement is that some residents living nearby beach in South East Asia has built embankment to fight against the rise of sea level. With the speed of polar ice melting, nevertheless, the loss of homeland and coastal areas appears unavoidable in upcoming years. On the other hand, the act of preventing the damaging effects of climate change might not be immediately efficient at present but certainly contribute towards the sustainable living standard.
It is obvious that climate change has resulted in a series of disastrous problems such as global warming, greenhouse effect, loss of biodiversity and it is comprehensively impossible for people to manage to get through during their entire lives. For example, the air pollution in the capital of Vietnam remains at the highest level of the world according to a trusted application, which has obstructed their daily activities.
According to above analysis, I believe that living with climate change should not be taken as a good solution, one should put more efforts to eliminate its effects for a better life.
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- Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...comprehensively impossible for people to manage to get through during their entir...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, so, while, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39830508475 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.918685776 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64406779661 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.9857023135 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.555555556 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2222222222 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170598129438 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654825822408 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324467074391 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999260047545 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410154659218 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.48 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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