Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is thought by the people rather than stooping the environment alteration and we have looked a solution in order to spend a life with those modifications. I completely disagree with this opinion and think that the earth is also needed for future generations so that they can live.
First of all, the modification of climate is one of the biggest problems that nowadays people are facing. If we continue with that changes one fine day, no living beings will exist in the earth. In other words, we have to tackle whatever changes are happening otherwise it will be depleted everything. For example, industries are producing CO2 because of that entire atmosphere with ozone layer are infected and it causes that UV radiation is directly entering to earth. So in order to live with that, industries need to set up a different procedure and entire need to filter in the underground. There are numerous changes are happening in the earth, natural habitat is losing day by day if we continue with that alteration and then it may cause for flora and fauna.
Secondly, despite living with the changes, the scientist needs to find a way to live that changes otherwise it will be affected for tomorrow. If any solution had provided until then its responsible for government to protect the environment and had to apply some limitations before setup any industries. However, some challenges have to face with the changes like breathing problem or so many health diseases. It will arduous task for the scientist to find new antibiotics for these diseases.
In conclusion, I strongly disagree with the idea that human need to find a way with climate modification because there is no guarantee till now that we will get a solution to live with those alterations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91946308725 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74905751813 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523489932886 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.953561754 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.769230769 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267020981347 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975135764292 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680016808857 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183471691639 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483694253782 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.