Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There has been some talks about asking people to accept global warming as an inevitable natural phenomenon and modifying their lifestyle to cope with all its effects. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with this notion and think that climate change should not be viewed as an irreversible and there can not be any life on earth if it is unattested and progressing.
Global warming is a natural reaction of the earths' atmosphere to the incessant large-scale release of green house gases such as carbon dioxide solely brought about by mans activities of daily living. Thus, climate change can be halted and eventually reversed if mankind gets its act together in time. For instance, if we stop burning fossil fuels for energy then the accumulation of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere can be checked consequently retarding the rate of global warming.
On the contrary, if we stay passive and hope to get along with climate change as a way of life, we may find eventually that a point will be reached beyond which, life will not be possible on our planet. Global warming has the potential to destroy the delicate balance in which nature regulates all life on earth. For example, our planet is covered by a thin layer of atmosphere which is responsible for maintaining a fairly narrow range of temperature across the globe. This layer is in grave danger of getting disintegrated by the effects of climate change leaving the earth susceptible to greater variations of temperature during the day as it happens on countless other planets all around the globe.
To sum up, I think that finding measures to adjust our lives according to the changing climate may seem like the most sensible thing to do but it is not an option that mankind can choose in the long run as its very survival depends on turning the tides against global warming.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'earths'' or 'earth's'?
Suggestion: earths'; earth's
...al warming is a natural reaction of the earths atmosphere to the incessant large-scale...
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Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f global warming. On the contrary, if we stay passive and hope to get along...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gulates all life on earth. For example, our planet is covered by a thin layer of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, i think, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63577343247 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568253968254 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.2283784329 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.0 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15738610449 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582866393819 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523853581955 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100225443255 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431576644477 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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