Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
From the past to the present day, climate change is becoming a significant threat over the world. some people argued that we should adapt to survive with it rather than try to solve it. I completely disagree with this opinion as we still have time to tackle this matter so that we could reduce the impact on human beings.
First of all, scientists have spent decades looking for solutions to help us deal with the problem of climate change. However, so far we have not found a satisfactory explanation for this problem. Practically, people simply neglect the significance of climate change and suffer the consequences of their own actions. For example, we all knew about the double disaster in japan in 2011, when the Japanese suffered an earthquake and tsunami that killed tens of thousands of people. These phenomena have shown that we are not really prepared for this. Moreover, we cannot predict what will happen in the future if we overlook the significance of climate issues. Not to mention that our actions will become the consequences that our next generations will have to bear in the future.
It seems that climate change is getting worse day by day. It is impossible to think of living with it when people can't live with natural disasters that keep coming, and consequently, it is literally impossible to redress it by one person or a few individuals. It is a case that humanity must work cooperatively before it is too late. Right now, the first priority is to start taking action and let people all over the world know that how the importance of climate change and how it going to impact us. Many countries legalize the protection of the environment and it has a wide effect since everyone has to follow the laws. However, although there will be some people who will not accept change, we can still approach them slowly and convince them to show them what we have been going through. At the same time, we will take measures such as reducing plastic uses, using alternative energy, awareness valuable of goods, using public transport to decrease pollution, and go on.
In short, disregarding the problem does not help anything but make it worse. We must know how to seize the opportunity to be able to save us from the disasters that may come. We have had too much time on this, now it is time to join hands to save the world. It is now or never.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...ng a significant threat over the world. some people argued that we should adapt to s...
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Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... to think of living with it when people cant live with natural disasters that keep c...
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Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... it by one person or a few individuals. It is a case that humanity must work coope...
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Line 7, column 272, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...n hands to save the world. It is now or never.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, really, regarding, so, still, as to, for example, in short, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1951.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67865707434 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53743317782 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561151079137 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6580862913 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9047619048 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220995191989 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600215795383 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511009138331 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13516847675 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062986727163 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.