Some people think that poverty is the reason behind most crimes. Do you agree or disagree.
Undoubtedly, the number of crimes has been rising over the past few decades. Some people think that poor economic conditions are the reason behind these. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this. Therefore, in this essay, I will discuss two main reasons to support my opinion.
First of all, recently, people who have a strong financial background have been accused of many crimes. Their involvement in these civil and criminal cases shows that even the wealthy can be a part of the crime. This makes many people worried and the State urgently needs to review the cases that threaten the country's economy. In fact, corruption problems come from financially stable individuals. For instance, there was a case about a group of artists in Vietnam who took advantage of charity work for the Central region, they deducted more than half of the people's charity money to make their own property. This conclusively demonstrates even popular celebrities can commit crimes.
Next, criminals are often those who need opportunities and lack self-honesty. In other words, dishonest people will always see a high chance of committing a crime, which means it makes them fall into a criminal mentality. However, we can see that some when they really see their mistake and be more honest with themselves, they will find the right path. For example, many burglars even though they are poor they always find a way to live without sin. some people even admit that they do not want to commit a crime, but when they see a condition that gives them an opportunity, they lose themselves.
Overall, everyone has their own perspective. But from my point of view, I think poverty is not a primary reason for criminal behavior. For a crime to happen, it will need a lot of elements to form and we can see the most important factor perhaps their personality. A poor person can live a very leisurely and sin-free life if they find themselves a character that is nobler than anyone else.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 562, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...on, they deducted more than half of the peoples charity money to make their own propert...
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Line 5, column 452, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
... always find a way to live without sin. some people even admit that they do not want...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in fact, first of all, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88656716418 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60340610042 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588059701493 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9267370675 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1578947368 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6315789474 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15789473684 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191234751432 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574245940996 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749424878152 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120682050027 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631407656859 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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