Some people think that the internet has brought people closer together while others think that people and communities are become more isolated. Discuss both sides & give your opinion.
The Internet has been in widespread popular use for just over two decades and serve as a major tool for communication. Some people say that the Internet has narrowed distance among people, while there are others argure that it isolates people from real society. In this essay, I will look at both sides of the argument and give my opinion.
On the one hand, it is widely accepted that our relationship are closer thanks to the Internet. The Internet helps people to maintain existing ties, often to strengthen them. A large amount of the communication that takes place online is often with the same set of friends and family who are also contacted in person and by phone. Social networks such as Facebook, twitter enable us to find and contact with our high school friends who we has since lost touch with. Moreover, people around global are online and using the same websites, which gives both individuals and businesses more opportunites than ever before to extend our networks and reach out to people we may otherwise never meet. For example, on Facebook, million groups about music, fashion, sport, health,...have been built so that people can easily make friends and chat with someone who share the same interests with them. Obviously, the Internet does bring us closer together as it offers a platform through which we can interact with people we already know as well as the unknown.
On the other hand, cyber is said to damage social connections of its users. Social media sites can make it more difficult for us to distinguish between the meaningful relationships we foster in the real world, and the numerous casual relationships formed through social media. By focusing so much of our time and psychic energy on these less meaningful relationships, our most important connections may weaken. The internet seduces people into spending time online at the expense of time spent with friends and family. Internet-addicts tend to sit at home and not going out to talk to their neighbors across the strees, visting relatives or traveling with friends. Hence, it is clearly shown that the internet sucks people away from in-person contact and fostering real-world disconnection.
In conclusion, although it is undeniable that online network has brought us enormous useful services, I hold the view that cyber has ruined our interaction with reality. It is high time local communities try to encourage people to take part in local activities for a better society development
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| 2020-11-06 | Marywonderlaw | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 440, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...act with our high school friends who we has since lost touch with. Moreover, people...
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Line 3, column 719, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...e never meet. For example, on Facebook, million groups about music, fashion, sport, hea...
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Line 3, column 769, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...oups about music, fashion, sport, health,...have been built so that people can eas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2075.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04866180049 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69984422468 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579075425791 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7828011164 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.277777778 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240122538345 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771660050604 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715758502128 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150558587131 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654941228838 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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