Some people think it is better to educate both boys and girl in separate schools others however say girls and boys benefit more from attending mixed school'.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
According to few peoples schools should be separate for girls and boys whereas, other individuals think that co- educational system is very beneficial for them.In my opinion, it is better to send boys and girls in same schools.
There are many reasons to send a girls and boys in some school. Firstly, no gender discrimination taken place in such schools and they taught the importance of equality, apart from this they learn how to give the respect of in front people of their. Both genders get into the school same level of opportunity.Moreover the students get to learn cooperation with each other. For instance, in the corporate word both men and women work together and if a child used to learn in a unisexual involvement he will easily get adjusted there.
On the other hand separate schools for boys and girls as per their gender has it on reasons.Some parents feel that in separate schools their children more focus on their academic as well as boost their grades and marks. Sometimes, friendship of boys and girls distract them from their academics.Therefore, in order to and secure result parents in enroll their children in separate schools.
Having said that, I personally do not feel that this can do not true entirely, because when the girls and boys are work together, they can learn to respect for both genders.It is a crucial learning since it is a adopts from an early age.
To recapitulate, I do not see that the main reason to study in separate schools over the co-educational ones because students adopt long life skills like respecting as well as operating, so it is the best reason to choose.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, apart from, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83512544803 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84499322663 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559139784946 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1098562483 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.888888889 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4444444444 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353155356287 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150920951764 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926975580416 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182240932222 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878960470099 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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