Some people think that it is better to leave their home country for improving their work and living opportunities. Others believe that it is better to stay in their home country.
In this era of increasing globalization, many individuals tend to migrate to other places as they reach maturity, however, others prefer to live in the same city for the rest of their lives. In this essay, we will discuss both the sides followed by my opinion on this topic.
On one hand, people shift to other cities or countries to learn as well as grow in a different environment. The main objective of their immigration is to develop in a new as well as an advanced environment and stay in an ambience with increased earning opportunities. For example, humans from a rural area usually move to cities for an upgraded lifestyle and for better work opportunities. Therefore, despite being a struggling move people consider shifting to a developed area to upgrade themselves and earn more money.
On the other hand, there are another type of humans who do not want to struggle and wish to live their lifein the same place they have been living since their childhood. These individuals are kind of people who prefer peace over money. For example, many humans from semi-urban areas spend their whole life by doing farming and they enjoy doing so and do not want to migrate anywhere. Hence, they are more inclined towards living a simple stress-free lifethan a struggling one.
To conclude, in my opinion, individuals should be open to choices for their better future whether it requires moving to some other city or living in their hometown. If one is confident that they can achieve their lifegoal by moving out they should definitely pursue their plans and on the contrary,
if they find they home city more comforting and satisfying, they should enjoy their life in the same direction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, kind of, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87543252595 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65511811099 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550173010381 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5514475125 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.416666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310128353199 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104543437109 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784496355107 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164510512777 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610508937807 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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