Involving in some activities during free time is very important for every people. Some experts suggest that, people need to do activities which can improve their mental status when they are in leisure time, while, others say that, everyone need to give rest for their mind at that time. This essay, however, discusses both views and gives an opinion.
Some psychologists say that, stimulation for the mind during leisure time is very important, so, people should do activities which can stimulate their mind. However, free time is the only time when people can engage in activities as per the like of their mind. Moreover, people wanted to feel that they are free to do anything which can make their sole happy, such as, traveling and playing. So, instructions while utilising the free time may create negative impacts on some individuals.
On the other hand, some people say that, people should rest while they are in off time. Nonetheless, resting may not help a person to convert his hectic schedule into an interesting one. Along with that, people do rest as per their requirements in every day. For instance, duty time is only six to eight hours in most of the countries. So, there is no need to have more rest while they are in off days. Therefore, people should do some interesting activities while they are in leisure time.
To conclude, having rest and doing activities which can stimulate the mind can be done at anytime. So, I believe that, people ought to do activities which can make their mind happy and free during those days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in everyday'?
Suggestion: in everyday
...eople do rest as per their requirements in every day. For instance, duty time is only six to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, while, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83082706767 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41142776966 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484962406015 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1271827484 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395496393821 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152637309173 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883676873992 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271582075912 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832587492292 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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