Some people think it is more beneficial to play sports that are played in teams. However, some people think it is more beneficial to play individual sports. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
As our societies become more centered on city life. People have to rejuvenate themselves, pursuing a comfortable level of physical exercise. Thus a compare between team sports and individual sports to find out which is more beneficial. We could take a close look before reaching the decision.
On one hand, the benefits of group activities are considerable and could let us feel stronger physically and mentally. Taking team sports does not mean the ego. Learning how to get feedback without fearing your relationships are jeopardy which has a significantly positive effect to teenagers. Frequently contact with team, receive feedback from teammates build up their maturities. Beside that, a team game performance, necessitating a high level of coordination and reaction time, not just tuning muscles. Team sports teach us to appreciate the teamwork, to be aware of our strengths and how to contribute these strengths to the shared goal.
On the other hand, as having fun is a key. Being in a wrong team could sap your energy rather than feel empowered. Choosing a sport or looking for a team would be difficult. Instead we refer independent activities, doing gym or just go for a running. Individual sports require a higher level of self-reliant. Success or failure depend on yourself and every competition could push your personal best. This can improve your self-confidence and independence in all areas of life.
In conclusion, While there are some different advantages between two kinds of sport. Both of them bring people to the high level of physical exercise, affecting positively to restore our body and mind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...comfortable level of physical exercise. Thus a compare between team sports and indiv...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
... looking for a team would be difficult. Instead we refer independent activities, doing ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, thus, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21374045802 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97740260737 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652671755725 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0561592061 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.8947368421 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7894736842 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36842105263 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114195491716 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337183838502 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338799573317 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796320314265 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041530081442 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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