As, our societies become more centered on city life. People have to rejuvenate themselves, pursuing a comfortable level of physical exercise. Thus, a compare between team sports and individual sports to find out which is more beneficial. We could take a close look before reaching the decision.
On one hand, the benefits of group activities are considerable and could let us feel stronger physically and mentally. Taking team sports does not mean the ego and learning how to get feedback without fearing your relationships are jeopardy which has a significantly positive effect to teenagers. In fact frequently contact with team, receive feedback from teammates build up their maturities. Beside that, a team game performance, necessitating a high level of coordination and reaction time, not just tuning muscles that teach us to appreciate the teamwork, to be aware of our strengths and how to contribute these strengths to the shared goal.
On the other hand, as having fun is a key. Being in a wrong team could sap your energy rather than feel empowered and choosing a sport or looking for a team would be difficult. Instead, we refer independent activities such as: doing gym or just go for a running that require a higher level of self-reliant. Success or failure depend on yourself and every competition could push your personal best which can improve your self-confidence and independence in all areas of life.
In conclusion, While there are some different advantages between two kinds of sport. Both of them bring people to the high level of physical exercise which affect positively to restore our body and mind.
- Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many part of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?Support your opinion with reasons and examples from your own knowledge and experie 52
- The tradition that family gets together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts 84
- Some people think it is more beneficial to play sports that are played in teams. However, some people think it is more beneficial to play individual sports. Discuss both views and give your own opinion 67
- Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 78
- Research shows that business meetings discussions and training are happening online nowadays Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 79
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As, our societies become more centered on ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, thus, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21072796935 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98650586391 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659003831418 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.5728396103 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3529411765 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76470588235 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112018875647 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357393114715 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358089714622 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780061179413 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440587170126 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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