Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Sports should played in team is better says some people and moreover some people says that playing individual sports gives benefical.sports played in teams like cricket or football. While like individual sports like swimming or tennis. We have a lot of individual sports and team sports. This essay will discuss both individual sports and team sports.
Moreover, lot of team sports like cricket, football.. gives more beneficial to players.
although every player has a responsibilities about the team.usally its not easy task to play in team sports. IN additionally we can get a lot of chances in team sports.oftenily each and every player must be fit in these sports. Example, In our country, cricket has a more players incase if 1st player doesn't performs well and the 2nd player performs well and the team wins.it doesnot matter to the team if a single player performs well are not. In a team sport we also have a disadvantage, if a player performs well but the team loss. Those players did not get any beneficial and there is no gratitude towards the player. However, playing team some how fell better to plays individual.
In the individual sports, like swimming, tennis.. players need to carry their whole responsibilities behalf of our own country. There are lot of struggles and hard work in individual sports. IN case, wining sport is depends on player performance. Moreover their are lot of sports in Olympics are individual sports. Example, in recent Olympic sports like tennis p v Sindhu played well and she got the medal. And also there are many disadvantages in Olympics also the player does not get second chances in sports are if a player needs a help there is no other option for the player in individual sports. We have a lot of confidence and strength in playing individual sport.
This essay has discussed between the players played in team sport and the players played in individual sport. Although both views have merit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...the players played in individual sport. Although both views have merit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93920972644 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75023421063 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440729483283 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.3314812399 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8636363636 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9545454545 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299114849987 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121231580897 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896801594163 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228055800444 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111708112432 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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