Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Improving the environment, individual can do nothing. The only difference was made by the government or large companies. Each and every common people are the responsible for the improvement change. This essay will argues individuals can do nothing to improve the environment, only government and large companies can make a difference.
For improving the environment individual can do nothing but the government can make a lot of of changes for the improving the environment. Eventually both can make the improving the environment change. But improving the environment needs a more money and power to improve the environment. There are lot of rules and restrictions to improve the environment .Government had a enough money and they different schemes for controlling or improving the environment. There are many more Reasons for improving environment by government are if they want to clean the polluted lake they usually call to the municipality staff and make the lake clean. And that too, large companies make campaigns regarding improving the environment. Example, In private software companies the additionally conducts the 2k run and furthermore regarding air pollution the company manager suggests the staff to come over by bicycle to office behalf bike. In some companies they eventually cuts the pays off the employees for improving the environment change. From my conclusion i am totally agree with these statement.
Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment change. For environment change a single person could not do anything. Moreover, improving environment each and every person stood take their stand and make the changes. It not depends on one person, For example, In my colony every month we would like to clean our area, ground and premises clean. we will team up and split our works depends on their interest and strength we can clean all the areas. In additionally, some times we donate a money for environment change. By the end of the day if we want to clean our area we need to take a permissions from the government office. Its a too risky thing, some times the government will not give permissions for us.
This essay has argued between individual and government about the improving the environment change. From my opinion, the government and large companies make improving the environment change.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 32.0 8.3376753507 384% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1967.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23138297872 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98669028625 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438829787234 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.246922178 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5217391304 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.347826087 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08695652174 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431233280166 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164766085406 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149238820657 0.0667982634062 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323441636291 0.151304729494 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126152750988 0.056905535591 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.