Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People's opinion differs as to whether taming animals is gratifying thing for children or harmful for them. Though there are some robust altercation against I, confide that keeping pets is a grand idea to boost children self-esteem. However, I shall scrutinies both views in the subsequent essay.
On the one hand, there are some presumable reason why people might argue that pets should not be kept as they are terrifying. The first and foremost point of them is, animals do not have feelings; thus, they can bite children. Here we know animals tend to be feral, and they can hurt people, especially children. There is an abundant number of od news is so far telecasted in yo the TV that animals have bitten children.
Another cause is, children are very good at learning. They can quickly adopt animals habit and act like wild.
On the other hand, despite the above arguments, I still uphold the side that animals are blessing for children. There are two major points to support this altercation. First of all, children can play with them. They can pass their spare time by playing with animals, which abolishes their mental stress. Owing to which, they become better concentrator. One more prime contention is, children can be responsible trough feeding and taking care of animals. It is found on a study that, those childrens usually become orderliness who spend and feed their pets.
To conclude, it can not be repudiated that keeping animals as a pet has some drawbacks, but the merits have outweighed the demerits in the long run.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
Peoples opinion differs as to whether taming animals is gratifying thing for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, still, thus, as to, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90458015267 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49365198366 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641221374046 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3978236336 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5882352941 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4117647059 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70588235294 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178099169767 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572791104531 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500347696126 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109354418185 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701323910363 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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