Some people think that managers alone should make decisions in the company, while others think that employees should be involved in the decision-making process too. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The probability of making a correct decision increases with the increase in the number of opinions or probable solutions and the number of opinions peak when the number of individual rise. So it becomes very important to involve employees in the decision making process along with the managers.

The employees are the bridge between the customers and the managers hence they know the demands and expectations of the customers better. When we involve the employee in a meeting, they can rise issues of the customers to the managers. Hence by doing so a better decision can be taken which can improve the product. This improved product will not only please the existing customers but will also contribute to the rise in new ones and hence the profits of the company.

There is a saying that ,"Happy employees led to happy customers". The happiness and satisfaction of the employees is transferred to customers of the company. The charmed employees seldom resign from the company hence saves the money and efforts exhausted in recruitment and training of new employees. To ensure the contentment of the employees it becomes a must to involve them in the decision making process of the company.

To conclude it can be said that the opinions of the employees cannot be overlooked while making important decisions of a company. By involving the employees to the meeting, the quality of the decision can be enhanced. The conclusions of the meeting involving employees are more customer friendly hence contributing to the improvement in quality of product and profit of the company. The involvement of employees in important decision making process also make them more related to the company hence inculcating a sense of mutual progress among them and the company.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12413793103 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88516645854 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.427586206897 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0634361725 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.142857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27629556876 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118491053011 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898565168142 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182885802087 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812395934841 0.056905535591 143% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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