It is stated that having a good mental health is of paramount importance to excel in sports, while others argue that it is more essential for athletes to be physically fit. I believe that both factors play an equal role in promoting the perseverance and agility of sportspeople.
Admittedly, a strong mentality, is vital for athletes to overcome a host of incredibly challenging matters involved in sport. Given the pressure of winning, frequent training of mental toughness would help sport players endure the intensity and stay focused throughout the match. Roger Federer, say, an elite tennis player, has achieved certain level of mental prowess by practicing composure and self-command on a daily basis. This, has allowed him to gain confidence regardless of situations and become one of the world’s calmest athletes. In addition, having a clear state of mind is a game-changer in deciding the outcome of the match, even professional players have been witnessed to underdog their rivals if their resistance and positivity died out. Hence, this is a testament to why strong-willed players are inclined to attain great success.
However, it is imprudent to downplay the significance of physical fitness in playing sports. In fact, physical strength is regarded as the common requirement for sportspeople as they are regularly faced with incredibly challenging physical maneuvers. This, has forced them to boost their brute strength and stamina to win over their opponents. For instance, weightlifting, is a perfect example of the sport which requires athletes to be immensely physically fit to be able to lift several sets of weights. Furthermore, in some sports such as football, it is essential for the players to master their grit to endure a 90-minute match. Thus, being physically strong is one of the crucial factors constituting a seeded player.
In conclusion, I believe that having mental strength and being physically fit are of great in equal measure to succeed in sports as both qualities enable athletes to develop different sets of skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, so, thus, while, as for, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27051671733 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97765628178 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580547112462 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4742338022 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.6 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213831448083 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663698375355 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500502798701 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143479542819 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482966215944 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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