Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is an ever-increasing use of technology for socialization such as what's up, Facebook, twitter etc, in the social channels. It is often argued that there is a positive development, while, others disagree and believe it will lead to adverse ramifications. This essay agrees, advanced technology is beneficial to people.this essay will discuss both points of views.
It is clear that technology has provided more ways to communicate than ever before. Moreover, it is easy to communicate with people who are living far from the family. It is therefore agreed that social media is a very worthwhile tool for more sociable. The smartphone is a prime example, where people can easily communicate with each other quickly and easily.
However, many disagree and feel that modern technology deprives people of real interactions is still possible throughout the conferences. For example, functions, meetings make it possible for the people in interacting ways.
Moreover, technology takes away the physical aspect of communication. This limitation can make people feel an absence of the human touch and can take away from the clarity of a message.
To sum up, the benefit of social media, particularly the Internet, allows communicating at any time irrespective of their location, however, as long as we are careful to keep in mind the importance of modern technology benefits are clearly positive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38461538462 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07483293395 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601809954751 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8520416364 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21558580784 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717044686744 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294286757069 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103036792308 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427387215643 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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