Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, along with the development of modern society, there are increasing opportunities for people to earn more money and have extra funds. Some people insist that being rich gives a person the chance to help others. However, from my perspective, I believe that helping others is not their responsibility. This essay will outline some reasons for my idea, and provide necessary examples.
It is undeniable that people with the better financial condition have more opportunities to help others. When a person has more money than they need to afford their lives, they are more likely to donate it to charity works. In that way, they can contribute to upgrading the quality of the poor’s lives. For example, if the living expense for one person in the USA is around $1000 per month, people who earn around $2000 may be more likely to make a charitable donation. Indeed, many stars and millionaires have constantly contributed to reduce the number of financially disadvantaged families or reduce the number of slums in their countries.
However, people should not assume that helping the poor is the rich’s responsibility. To earn money, they also have to work hard, therefore, they have the right to enjoy the results of their work. Especially in the civilized society as nowadays, people can independently choose the way they spend their money if it is legal. In fact, there have not been any rules that tell people with more prosperities to support the poorer ones.
In conclusion, although there are more opportunities for the rich to help others, this practice is actually not their responsibility. In my view, to promote more equality in society, there should be more proper charity organizations, funds, and campaigns instead of incorrect norms and assumptions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 134, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10689655172 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85563256329 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2680170284 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204758804924 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873521912172 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979561029801 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139965041371 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723509811444 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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