Some people think that music brings benefits to individuals and societies others, however , think that music can have a negative influence on both.
Discuss both the view and give your opinion.
It is thought by some that through music individuals and societies can get advantages. whereas others believe that it has a reverse effect on both. In my opinion, I agree with the former view because it encompasses more benefits.
On the one hand, the reason why certain people including me deem that music brings merits for masses and community because it gives serene and tranquillity. when people feel bored and they are going through with some troubles at that time individual prefer to listen to music as it rejuvenates mortals mood and gives a kind of motivation. Other merits are music connects us with different culture and tradition. Diversity of music helps people to know about varied ritual and language of other nation by listening to lyrics of sound. The most paramount boon of music is it succour public to improve health. A quintessential of it is illustrated in a recent survey by the mental health centre of India revealing the fact that children who are suffering from autism disease get peace when they listen to music and that helps kids to tackle hyper behaviours. Therefore, some kinds of music considered as an aid for people.
On the flip side, there is another group opposing the belief and think that music put a negative impact on both because it creates noise pollution. sometimes when people organise functions such as wedding, parties, casual meeting they arrange music for sake of enjoyment even in big cities in clubs music often played till late at night which leads to noise pollution. Many times when the noise level exceeds beyond its precise decibel level it creates a hearing problem. Another issue that put an immense impact on the community is bad songs. certain song such as rock song, pop song, high pitch song tends to increase aggression which is harmful to mental health as well as affects an individual's behaviour, especially in today's young generation.
In recapitulation, despite people may varying on their opinion I believe music carry tons of benefits to individual and public as it fascinates calmness and through that persons, health gets improved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58689381848 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585227272727 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6263945075 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316810673017 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978453756076 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645415866097 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184953659801 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566074659892 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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