Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of the old houses in the local areas, while others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own styles. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
While new-built houses is thought to keep the style of the antiquated houses, some other people have the contrary opinion that everyone can build their houses of any style they desire. I will discuss both of these views in my essay below.
On the one hand, it is encouraged that the new constructions should be built upon ancient designs. Actually, following old style designs is the preservation and respect of traditional values which are created by the previous generations.
One clear example is Hanoi Old Quarter, which is known as the famous icon of Vietnam’s capital. Local people and government have issued policies to reconstruct old houses while keeping traditional architectures. It contributes to boost tourism economy and help Hanoi become a well-known tourists attractions, especially foreigners. Moreover, it also has educational values for children. By respecting historic values, the youngsters can learn attitude and good characters.
In contrast, I also agree with the opinion supporting local people choosing the styles for their houses at their discretion. Many people have no interest in traditional style and they prefer to choose a new modern style for their home. It is the creation of new styles and also the diversity of the city’s architecture. Furthermore, the cost for building a modern simple house is much lower than one which has the complex and antique design. Hence, local people have the right to make decisions on the styles that suit their financial ability and preferences.
To sum up, although some people think that the design and construction of modern house should follow traditional buildings, I personally believe that owners of them can decide the way their house should be built.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, hence, moreover, so, well, while, in contrast, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29241877256 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83209257407 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57761732852 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6839307617 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.442622626 0.244688304435 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127536380228 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115817164832 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24165983217 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111303669938 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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