Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news.
However, others believe that they can get news better through another media. Discuss both views and give your opinion ?
People read news everyday to catch up with the current pace of the world. This divides into two groups, one is favored in reading news in newspapers, while the other one accesses a good resource of news through using the internet. In this essay, I will share my thoughts on both sides and then give my own opinion.
On the one hand, traditional reading news makes people feel easy to their eyes and more importantly, the information is more precise than on the internet. Many people are not used to reading news through a screen because it often makes their eyes itchy and their head fatigue. In fact, a large number of people assume that they are more focused compared to the E-news when many advertisements and notifications from social media distracting them. Another advantage of newspapers is they are more reliable.This is because information on newspapers is needed to inspect carefully, so most of fake news or unreliable sources of information will be eliminated before publishing for the public.
On the other hand, although newspapers are still holding some benefits to some people, it is undeniable that online news is beneficial to people in terms of convenience and diversity. As long as people are able to connect to a wifi, they can access a wide range of topics of news on the internet, thus, they can feel less bored due to lack of variety. The fact is that most people nowadays often read news online because it is instant and inexpensive. People do not need to spend a few dollars to acquire newspapers when they are available on the internet for free. As well as this, the news on websites are being updated daily, so people can easily feel up-to-date with the current happenings in the world which is quicker than those reading by newspapers.
In conclusion, although traditional newspapers still bring some merits to people, In my opinion, I advocate for E-news because of its quick, cashless, and various types of news.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: every day
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Suggestion: many; numerous
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Suggestion:
...ge number of people assume that they are more focused compared to the E-news when...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
... of newspapers is they are more precise.This is because information on newspapers is...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...icker than those reading by newspapers. In conclusion, although traditional news...
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...cause of its convenience and diversity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, then, thus, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86666666667 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69219188643 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509090909091 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.5385914759 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.538461538 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28922870672 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1093191196 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302345232837 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17609493314 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381320362826 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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