Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
It is assumed that the most effective way to get updated is by reading articles; meanwhile, other means are found to be far more pragmatic. Both these schools of thought hold valid arguments. From my perspective, I am truly in agreement with the second viewpoint. This essay will take both sides into consideration and make my personal assumption.
On the one hand, newspapers have, for years, been utilized for their breadth. It is tangible that newspaper content is guaranteed as it is always censored before being broadcast so that readers can shield themselves from inaccurate propaganda. Besides, professional journalists from prestigious publishers satisfy even the most demanding readers with academic writing styles. By learning from infinite sources of printed news, individuals can not only broaden their language proficiency but also attain an assortment of lexical resources.
On the contrary, other media have become increasingly imperative news sources these days due to their significant benefits. Initially, in terms of updates and easy access, individuals are fascinated to read news online. To be more precise, with the widespread presence of the Internet, people with portable devices, such as a smartphone, can access huge storage of news in just a few clicks rather than waiting for days or weeks. Furthermore, diversity is one of the key advantages of social media over traditional newspapers as online news channels have brought a considerable reading experience to readers, thanks to the constant advancement in technology. For instance, people can both re-watch their favorite videos and make comments whenever they want with only a device connected to the Internet, while a mere newspaper does not possess the capability to do the equivalent.
In conclusion, although printed newspapers have conclusive advantages, I am totally against that it is the most dominant way to receive the news as more and more people are drawn to using the Internet and other media due to their outstanding benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, second, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44479495268 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96340297753 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618296529968 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3849553423 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.285714286 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220667784184 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662834008654 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463414730616 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12663317934 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461483875669 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.