Some people think that nowadays children have too much freedom .Do you agree or disagree?
In modern approach, with the advancement of technology freedom is increased. Majority of people saying that specially for children get more liberty as compared to early time. I agree with this statement and highlight my views in the forth coming paragraphs.
To commence with, government implement some rules about the liberty of brains. In these days students are well educated and they have knowledge about their own rights such as their driving licenses and many more these type of things so Government implement some laws for this . For instance, in these days after eighteen people can drive anything like bike or cars with driving license but as compare to past children do not have knowledge about it and they do not show interest in it .
Internet is the other reason to behind this statement, with the help of technology internet is available and brains show their interest to learn about their rights and their lifestyle from internet because today's child follow western culture and on some websites of internet these type of knowledge are available which is followed by children's and they become more outward from their parents . For instance, Google which give knowledge about how we live in these days so children do this all in their early age. Therefore , internet is main source of freedom.
Hectic schedule is the supplementary reason for behind this trend, because both parents are working nowadays so they cannot take responsibility of their children and give liberty to take their life decisions and about their study field like in which type of study they show their interest. With this pupils become independent in their life and get success in their life . As a result, with hectic schedule parents do not interfere children's life and give freedom for their life standards.
To conclude, I retraite my views by saying that although, freedom is better for children ,parents should take some responsibilities about children's life such as ,their future planning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12307692308 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55781450846 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476923076923 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.100570081 49.4020404114 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.076923077 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147177857034 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683537627306 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393458587893 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100019862599 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285783876352 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.