It is generally accepted that playing games and watching television is favoriteable activities for children. some people hold onto notion that children should spend their time on studying instead of watching TV or playing games. Still, personally, I completely disagree with the idea that say TV and games should be eliminate from childhood and think that telecasting and gaming have their own benefits. this essay is going to establis the advantage of it behind the idea.
Various points could endorse the benefits of tv shows and computer games. the first reason to consider is that chirldhood need to have their own preferred leisure time in order to relive the strain from school. Watching Tv can be count as one of childhood favorite hobby becase television programs are provide a variety of entertainment for them such as cartoon network or disney , In addition, these program not only for entertainment but also teach them a new mindset. To illustate, when children watching scoopy doo they might be afraid of ghost but all of the story is about mystery that all character need to solve for the answer. So, children can rearrange their brain with this cartoon problem.
Moreover, there are many more benefits of playing computers games,it is no denying the fact that gane is ussually appealing to children for purpose of developing the cognizant of them. take my sister, for example, she is usually playing bookworm game,creative new words by arranging the letter that given by worm, which can help her to spell accurately English words. if she never plays it, she won't be know a variety of vocabularly.
However, some opponents may argue that these mentionedabove activities are wasting of studying time and it is supposed to be banned. Perhaps, this seems initially plausible but it cannot be denied that computer games and television programs can be deducted the strain in children and increase the memorize skill of them. Moreover, it can teach children to have an ability to solve problem by watching and playing that activities.
To conclude, althoght some people belive that ganes and TV are helpless for children, the advantages of them are obviously utweighted by disadvantages. The challenge for parents is to teach their children to manage their time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11528150134 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71394984287 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549597855228 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6962493777 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.235294118 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9411764706 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324973410587 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107149329867 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090713079854 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187562350949 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924499256683 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.