Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It commonly argued by the people about which one between parents and school, has the authority to teach the children to be great member of society. This essay will discuss both views while focusing in my opinion.
To start with, like in my country, Indonesia, children spend more than 10 years in the school. While studying, they also interact with their classmates, friends, teachers, and staffs which become their society. Then, they meet several characters, experiencing moments, and perhaps try to solve problems that happen during their school day. School experiences taught the children about life lessons, about being a great person in society, and also makes them well-prepared for facing their future study and career.
Despite school, parents are the first teacher for their children. Evidently, children learn a lot from their parents, so parents participation are initial for the kids' attitude. There are various things they can do to teach the children how to be a good part of the society, for instance, make a simple illustration about human with different colors, and explain to them that they need to be tolerant, because no matter the skin color is, they are still human.
It seems to me that I agree if parents are in charge of this, because the first teacher in children life are their parents. But we need to combine the school participation too, because the society gives themselves a real challenges that they need to face in order to become a great part of the society.
To conclude, both of parents and school participation are principal if we want to make our future society better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'kids'' or 'kid's'?
Suggestion: kids'; kid's
...rents participation are initial for the kids attitude. There are various things they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, then, well, while, for instance, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01111111111 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54890438821 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562962962963 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4655130736 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.75 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230366003551 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908241340388 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628175793189 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138700261654 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544301113338 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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