Some people think that professional athletes make good role models for young people, while others believe they don't. Discuss both the views and give our opinion.
It is true that personality of the sports persons have a crucial role in the society. Some individuals believe that professional sportsmen are standard models for youngsters; however, others openi that they don't. Before commenting my opinion, I would discuss both the views in ensuing paragraphs.
Considering former view, there are several reason for why people believe that athletes are good model for younger people. First and foremost one is that young people can learn a lot of things from them such as team work, leadership, decision power and many others. For example, Virat Kohli, who is a captain of Indian cricket team, has a good sense of humor, hard work skill, team management skill. So youth can adopt all kind of these skills from him. Moreover, all the athletes are motivational for the adolescent. To elaborate, young people can boost their confidence as well as get motivate with the help of reading a biography of the successful sportsman, because all the athletes do a many struggle and faced many problems to become a success in their life and teach method of solving problems related to particular field.
On the other hand, there are also few detrimental views of role model. First of all youth generation could not focus on their education study. They spend more time towards watching sports activity on television or playing games instead of study. Another one is that waste of money. To explain, adolescent blindly follow their favorite athletes. In fact, they would try to imitate their lifestyle and used products whatever they advertise whether it is useful or not.
In conclusion, although there are some negative effects of making athletes as a role model, I believe that it is very important for young generation to become a success in own life with the help of learning many things from the athletes' life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, as well as, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56064905754 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597402597403 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.6316199725 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.25 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313130914273 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889001273684 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922237936487 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183184917679 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631490859928 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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