Some people think that radio has become out-of-date , and there is no need to listen to the radio for entertainment and news . Do you agree or disagree ?
In the past , radio was considered the most convenient and important source of information . However , with the emergence of other media such as the TV and the internet , some individuals opine that radio as a medium will lose its value in the future . In my opinion , such pessimism does not hold any water .
One of the main reasons why radio would not become obsolete in the near future is that driving is very popular across the world as a way of life . Radio is a regular piece of equipment installed in a car , and to car users , listening to the radio while driving is an effective means of taking full advantage of their time and gaining the latest information , such as news , weather forecast , share markets , and so forth. Increased car use gives radio high mobility and its exposure continues to lead other media .
Secondly , for those people who have no time to watch TV , radio provides immediate and easy access to information .Another advantage of its continued popularity is that it is highly affordable . Radio broadcasting is free to the public , unlike the TV on which one has to pay for the channels of choice . Furthermore , the radio is portable . On the occasions where people cannot watch TV , read newspaper or surf the net , they can listen to the radio .
The newer technologies are also responsible for the popularity for radio . For example , people can get radio via satellite , the internet and cable nowadays . There are many other electronic devices , such as MP3 and MP4 players , which allow people to listen to the radio more easily and to use it for various entertainments , such as sharing their music collections . The only disadvantage of the radio is that it is unable to convey messages with sight and motion , as television or internet do . However , the radio is still able to serve the needs of audiences as it always did .
To put it in a nutshell , I pen down saying that the radio has many advantages that give it an edge over other media , either electronic or print . Therefore , radio broadcasting will continue to hold its important place as one of the mass media .
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Discourse Markers used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
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Verbs: 0.135135135135 0.155533422707 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100737100737 0.0946595960268 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.041769041769 0.0501214627716 83% => OK
Pronouns: 0.036855036855 0.0437548338989 84% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113022113022 0.122226691241 92% => OK
Participles: 0.02457002457 0.0403226058552 61% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6532538768 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.036855036855 0.0326793684256 113% => OK
Particles: 0.002457002457 0.00163938923432 150% => OK
Determiners: 0.0982800982801 0.0861772015684 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.014742014742 0.021408717616 69% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.014742014742 0.011925033212 124% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2159.0 1933.35771543 112% => OK
No of words: 405.0 316.048096192 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33086419753 6.12580529183 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.20517956788 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.246913580247 0.374742101984 66% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.177777777778 0.28420135186 63% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.138271604938 0.203846283523 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0987654320988 0.137316102897 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6532538768 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.037074148 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474074074074 0.56093040696 85% => OK
Word variations: 51.2378925332 60.7387585426 84% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.8235294118 20.7743622355 115% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.575240704 49.517814964 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 127.492653851 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8235294118 20.7743622355 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.823529411765 0.814263465372 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 49.0 3.99599198397 1226% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.6013071895 49.1944974215 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.83908045977 1.69124875643 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125574227289 0.102741220458 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0420649870222 0.0668466124924 63% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.595159915613 0.534860350844 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.140353918134 0.148594505496 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202401319461 0.134430193775 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724487109014 0.0742795772207 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.417729017141 0.324371583561 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0709752248371 0.0638462369009 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312566505478 0.228012699653 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910587736652 0.058150111329 157% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 10.4468937876 163% => OK
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9