Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In recent decades, there are a significant number of people who has taken into consideration of the importance of competition among children. Whereas, some people are more remarkable to encourage their children in terms of cooperation values as opposed of competing others since it is more beneficial for them.
To embark on, there is no denying belief that the life-competition will be more unpredictable in the future, as the globalization has been influencing the fast-forward life in the society. This case has been dictated as the indicator of parents to stimulate them about the power of competition. To illustrate it more, parents--who belong to high-developed economy, ultimately force their children to partake in every single course out of school life, for instance, English and math class for reaching the highest score in school.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that the sense of cooperation between people is obviously essential to be prompted since it is basically human needs. Further, that value will accelerate the understanding perspectives in children’s mind about the term “every human being have weakness, thus, we need to support each other”. Hence, children will comprehend that sentiment by respecting others. To elucidate it more, in school, teacher often delivers plenty of tasks which required team work. In that situation, the students are supposed to apply the cooperative value as opposed of competitive value.
After taking everything into consideration, the cooperative value evokes more fruitful effect towards children as it will unfold the comprehension of respecting people in a well-mannered rather than defeating people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, thus, well, whereas, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57587548638 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23052819748 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626459143969 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3989046188 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.272727273 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254828006665 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911608296918 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595911909364 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160092257544 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635042821672 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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