Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree
It is believed that the Internet can bring bad effects on people and society. While this statement can be true, I would argue that social networking sites can offer both advantages and disadvantages.
On the one hand, the Internet has it is own beneficial effects on our society. It provides us with opportunities to study new things by ourselves. For example, English is one of the subjects that we can study by ourselves. There are plentiful dictionaries that can help students looks up the meaning of the words such as the Cambridge dictionary, or Oxford dictionary. I myself also use these dictionaries to understand the root meaning of English words when I am confused about lexical items. Not only English, but we can also learn to play some instruments like the piano via online lessons on Youtube. These free lessons are mostly understandable and we can apply this knowledge on the piano at our home.
On the other hand, social networking sites also have some drawbacks. If people use the Internet too much, they will become lazy. For instance, Individuals who spend most of their time on the Internet often get some physical and mental health problems such as obesity, shortsightedness, humpbackness, stress, or depression. These health problems are caused because of their inactive, they do not exercise, come out of the house, or expose themselves to the sunlight. Besides some health problems, using the Internet extravagant, people might not think, brainstorm, or be creative anymore. They may depend on which is exist before, using cooked materials, and a society can not develop with most of the people like this.
To sum up, while depending on the Internet may lead to some negative effects, I still believe that it could have greater benefits to our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 617, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
...ve anymore. They may depend on which is exist before, using cooked materials, and a s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, may, so, still, while, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02702702703 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80917799508 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581081081081 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8937233371 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156401077333 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508608189685 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627761763911 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983672501902 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595769856098 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.