Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that these are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this modernized era, it has become a trend that everyone celebrates special occasions in a grand scale. Some people think that it is a waste of money where the others think that it is good individually and socially.
Firstly,it is true that we cannot stand on our own feet without the help of the others. So the interaction among people is an important thing for a person towards his achievements. On this point, it is good to celebrate weddings, birthday parties and other functions with the companions. When organizing special events, it should give the priority for the people who are invit...
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