Some people think spoken communication is more powerful than written communication.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is a fact that communication takes many different forms and there are basically two methods of conveying a person’s idea, namely spoken written. From my point of view, I entirely gravitate towards the idea suggested in the statement.
In the first place, verbal messages appear long before the introduction of written cues. Even before birth, babies’ parents often spend time talking to them; this is when only verbal stimuli can have a constructive effect on the development of the children. Obviously, at this stage, no communication via writing can be successful as the children cannot take in such clues. Therefore, this argument proves that even when this is no message conveyed through the use of the written form, speaking can perform its tasks well.
Furthermore, the most applied medium for imparting knowledge is by oral means. Most children are sent to school so that they can listen to their teachers and learn from their lessons. These are almost always carried out in speaking. Students do read, of course, but reading is less important to pupils, especially when they are in the early years of their education. This leads me to believe that spoken communication is of greater influence then written one.
Las but not least, there are subtle aspects that only face-to-face interactions can reveal. Whilst it is undeniable that people can sharpen and refine what they say when they communicate their thought via writing, real emotions can be hidden. In contrast, when talking in person, the two parties can sense how the other is truly feeling and take appropriate action accordingly. For example, as two friends are talking about the wedding rings their husbands bought for them, they may observe their friend’s facial expressions and adjust their act or they can change the subject if their friend does not feel comfortable.
In conclusion, it is my firm belief that when a person speaks, it can convey much more than when they write as they can be effective in the early years of childhood, schooling and can put across subtle feelings.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
It is a fact that communication takes many different forms and there are basically two metho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, of course, talking about, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04678362573 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64679809699 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2263585389 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.875 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9375 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105308720325 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386656996453 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532409407256 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064157848375 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246398833122 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
It is a fact that communication takes many different forms and there are basically two metho...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, of course, talking about, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04678362573 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64679809699 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2263585389 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.875 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9375 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105308720325 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386656996453 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532409407256 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064157848375 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246398833122 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.