Motor vehicle crashes are one of the leading causes of teen deaths. To prevent such road accidents, the government should ban people under 24 to drive motorcycles.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Among the main contributing factors to teenage mortality rates are accidents caused by young motorcyclists. A suggestion to reverse this worrying trend is for the government to introduce a law in which those under 24 must not ride their motorbikes. I opine that this idea is justifiable to some extent as there are other elements to be considered.
On the one hand, while I do agree that many young people are quite reckless when they are out in the street riding their vehicles, they should be held responsible for any accidents that happen. There are many older people who, albeit senior in age, still act very impulsively, or are not as skilled as their juniors at handling the wheel. For example, there was a recent newspaper report about road rage between a drunk middle-aged man and a young university student. The old man was to blame because he tried to cross the street, but did not give any signals and he was traveling really fast then, which caused a serious crash. He was seriously injured; the boy lost his life and many others were traumatized.
On the other hand, a magnitude of other points needs to be taken into account concerning the issue of teenage deaths. Substances abuse is probably the most deleterious culprit. Many youngsters are under enormous peer pressure to commit numerous wrongdoings to ensure a sense of belonging with their friends. In fact, hordes of them take drugs or drink excessively. Moreover, violent scenes on TV, and the Internet have been ubiquitous and easily accessed by people of all ages, teenagers included. This frequent exposure to such contents can gradually misshape their behavior and in many cases turn them into norms. To illustrate this, there are many cases of gunfire on university campuses and most of the convicts are students.
In conclusion, there are many explanations for the death rates among the youth and under-24 cyclists are just one contributor. Therefore, the claim that it is the number one killer is quite an exaggeration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, really, so, still, then, therefore, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in many cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94658753709 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69959556553 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614243323442 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2070835862 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0588235294 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139786557966 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366868574166 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381062895599 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085646751565 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327707753208 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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