Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others thinks that
intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?
According to some fraction of the society it is argued that success is the beast measure for intelligence
while others have a contradictory view point of that intelligence can be measured in other ways. In my
opinion that as the latter fraction is warranted. There is a deluge of arguments in favor of my stance and
the most prominent one is that as it is claimed, social awareness may hold far reaching application and
implication beyond all current expectation by exploring and identifying broad spectrum issues from
adaptively through crushing circumstances to success with multi-disciplinary values.
Moreover, as it is obvious wisdom and morality paves the way to realize about gaps, bias, limitations
and prejudices to be a better servant of the globe with a compassionate heart with openness to see and
understand the real valuable aspect. This influence young people to be better focused, message driven
and lit up the inside.
Furthermore, most of us have sense that, compassion, humanity, kindness and broad minded
personality fuels them inexhaustible drive and offers guide posts to reach the ultimate goal of individual
and society. Adaptively, spiritual success and social awareness boost immunity to negative outside
occurrences and become more resilient and bounce back quicker.
To sum up, in the view of the argument outlined above, I can conclude that despite some advantages of
this apprehension should not be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42543859649 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09024455649 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.2096826058 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.625 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.38176352705 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206677367966 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079771728503 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119064872939 0.0667982634062 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0521971230855 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889934132595 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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